| Position |
Describes events without answering the question. |
States a position that answers the question. |
Position is specific and is sustained through every paragraph. |
Position is precise, sustained, and shows why the obvious answer is not quite right. |
| Evidence |
General statements; few or no exact facts. |
Three paragraphs, each with at least one exact date, name or figure, from two or more case studies. |
Evidence is chosen because it is the strongest available, and it is explained rather than listed. |
Evidence from different case studies is set against itself to build the argument. |
| Named actors |
“Māori activists”, “protesters”, “the government”. |
Names the people and organisations involved, correctly. |
Names them and explains what each specifically did. |
Distinguishes between actors who wanted different things, rather than treating a movement as one voice. |
| Kind of claim |
Uses “rights” as one undifferentiated word. |
Correctly identifies the kind of claim in at least one case study. |
Distinguishes kinds of claim across case studies and shows it mattered. |
Shows how the kind of claim shaped the response it received, and holds tino rangatiratanga apart from the other four. |
| Objection and limit |
Neither present. |
An objection and a limit are both stated. |
The objection is genuinely the strongest one, and it is answered. |
Answering the objection makes the thesis stronger and more precise than it was. |